The Princess......is Dead

[Cloverclaw]

this is getting really good

[LilTiger]

Soon, it was morning. It was a sad day. There was a cerimony in honor of Kiara, more likely a funeral. Everyone in the pridelands wept with saddness that the princess was gone. When the funeral was over, Simba started crying. "Nala, this is Kopa all over again....." Nalacried to, even the outsiders cried.

[LilTiger]

Soon, the body finnaly got up. It started to rain again. She fell on the hard land. "Man, that was a long fall." It said. It was Zira, she was alive. Seh looked at Kiara. "Pff, stupid princess." Zira started walking off. She thought for a mintute. She did try to save me, but she died trying.... Zira thought. Zira decided towwait. To see if the princess would wake up.

[KovusTrueMate]

Kovu Sad!!! Very, very, dramatic and...
stuff. Keep if up! It's awesome!

[KopsTheTerminator]

Aww, kind Zira FTW ^^ We don't get to see a lot of kind Zira scenes, unfortunately. Keep up the good work! ^^

[LilTiger]

Zira had waited for 10 mintues. Zira decided to go. "Goodbye princess." Zira said. Then, Zira started to climb up the cliff. She looked where the river first started. Zira felt a little sorry for Simba, he lost his daughter. But Zira continued on and was soon at the top of the cliff. Priderock here I come Zira then started running towards priderock.

[MheetuBean]

Ooooo! This is really good! I cant wait to read more! Although, iI feel horrible for Simba and Nala lossing 2 children . But, keep up the good work!

[LilTiger]

Simba was upset. When he started walking up to the cave. His old mother came up to him. "Simba... I'm sorry Kiara died. I wish I could change everything and have myself dead." Then, something hit Simba. He turned around to Sarabi. "Then that's what will happen!"
Then, Simba slaped his mother very hard. She scream in pain. She then landed on the ground. Her head started to bleed. Simba growled. Then his growl dissipered. "Mother....?" Simba's eyes wided. He killed his mother.

[LilTiger]

Chapter 2

Simba roared in pain. The lionesses ran towards Simba, who was near the broken Sarabi. "What happened Simba?" Nala asked as she nudged Sarabi's body. "I don't know...Something happened to me, then I striked at her. I really don't know." All the lionesses started whisphering. "How dare you hurt your own mother?!" All the lionesses started ganging up on him.

"Stop! I order you as queen! He said he didn't know what happened!" Nala shouted at them. All the lionesses turned around. Simba was upset. He walked into the cave. He laid down. He missed his mother. He knew his father wasn't proud of him.
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Soon, Zira was really cloe to priderock. Zira started walked closer until the rocks stopped her. Zira decided she should climb the rock instead. She climb on each part of the rock and never gave up. Her paw soon touched the top. The lionesses looked at the edge.

"Who's paw is that?" Dotty walked closer to the paw. Soon, half of the head was up. "It's Zira!" Everyone gasped. Soon, Zira's whole body was on priderock. "I'm here! I have to say something..."

[Kyarra06]

Well this is very good. I hope ur posting more! Poor Kiara though.....