Zira's Goodbye to Scar

[LilTiger]

[quote="CommandoTheLion"]hmm yeah.[/quote]

You really shouldn't always say "I agree" or "yeah",just so it raises up your posts

[Baya]

Very well done ^_^

Some CC though, i had trouble reading it and understanding who was talking because of the lack of quotes. Also if this was a bit more descriptive and lengthy it would be even more awesome.

I love this idea though, but did you HAVE to make Scar cower? XD I hate how they did that in the movie! They should have made scar die like Vlad Dracul did!

[CommandoTheLion]

im not Dx but anyways how long to next part of your story tho thats the real question? O.o

[KopsTheTerminator]

[quote="CommandoTheLion"]im not Dx but anyways how long to next part of your story tho thats the real question? O.o[/quote]

READ THE TITLE. DOOD. ''Zira's goodbye to Scar''. Zira can't say goodbye multiple times to Scar.

[CommandoTheLion]

hmm if you look into it there is a number of ways.

[KopsTheTerminator]

Like? It's just spam in my eyes.

[CommandoTheLion]

uh huh Riiiiiiiiight -.- but good byes are harder than you think.

[KopsTheTerminator]

I said goodbye I alot of times to my friends, some of my dead animals and my grandparents. I know it is hard. Darn you junior high school! I had to say farewell to alot of my friends... Well whatever let's stop spamming LilTiger's thread now.

[CommandoTheLion]

the most hardest goodbyes i had to take was my girlfriend that died in my arms =/ after a 3 year relationship. but i wont say anymore coz its too shocking and sad unless you want me to PM you or you PM me (This relates to this story well its similar). but back to topic now.

that was sad

[Baya]

This is a sign of a great work of literature. If the reader can relate to the story or not . Again, i applaud you.