Scar Exiles Nala
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Meskhenet
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Re: Scar Exiles Nala.
by Tacobell Lion » September 6th, 2012, 3:17 am
It means no worries.......for the rest of your dayssssss!
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Tacobell Lion
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Re: Scar Exiles Nala.
by Meskhenet » September 6th, 2012, 4:38 am
It's our problem free...philosophy.
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Meskhenet
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Tacobell Lion
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Meskhenet
Let this prayer be your guide
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Tacobell Lion
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Meskhenet
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Re: Scar Exiles Nala.
by Tacobell Lion » September 6th, 2012, 11:24 pm
Nothing, what's the motto with you?! 
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Tacobell Lion
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Re: Scar Exiles Nala.
by FlipMode » September 6th, 2012, 11:51 pm
viewtopic.php?f=8&t=17278
Come on guys, the thread was stickied for a reason (well two reasons actually, one being Az asked me to, the other being its required reading)
Pretty much, I mean - I would be kidding you if I said this did not need work. The story itself is okay, but the pacing and format need work. You will be amazed yourself how much nicer it will look if you edit it a bit.
Everything else was pretty solid, to be honest. Good job for what it is!
Come on guys, the thread was stickied for a reason (well two reasons actually, one being Az asked me to, the other being its required reading)
Pretty much, I mean - I would be kidding you if I said this did not need work. The story itself is okay, but the pacing and format need work. You will be amazed yourself how much nicer it will look if you edit it a bit.
Everything else was pretty solid, to be honest. Good job for what it is!
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FlipMode
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Meskhenet
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