simba and nala

simba and nala

Postby simbafan83 » January 31st, 2013, 7:13 am

simba and nala

a lion king fan fic
written in episodes
by simbafan83

this serialized fan fic is dedicated to
my best friends on the forum
who are very nice to me
and also many of my very nice and kind animal jam best friends



episode 1

prologue

our prologue begins way before the stampede scene
to help explain this, here is nala:

(nala narrating)

as many animals understand, both me and simba were born to different parents
i was born to sarafina, while simba was born to his parents

when mufasa talked to scar after the ceremony, mufasa wasnt pleased with scar
that he had missed the ceremony

"scar" said mufasa

'yes brother" said scar

"sarabi and i didnt see you at the presentation" said mufasa

"it was today, man i feel awful' said scar
then said "must have slipped my mind" said scar

"well, as slippery as your mind is, you know better to miss the ceremony" said zazu

mufasa and scar continued to argue for a few minutes
then as soon as scar left
zazu said

"well, at least there's one of them, sire, two in mine actually, and they always make really strange decisions"

"zazu" said mufasa

"and just think, sire, when ever scar gets dirty, you can use him as a rug and take him out to beat him"

mufasa laughed

(simba narrating)

just then, rafiki made a picture of me as a cub
rafiki was very happy when he did this
as he drew his picture he said:

"simba" said rafiki

(nala narrating)

now, as a cub, simba woke up mufasa
and mufasa made a speech to simba
one part was that he'd be next in line to be king
but given the fact that he now has a cousin
he'd have to hold down responisblities
from both sides

now meanwhile, in a quiet american town called ronald
alex grizzlyton, a prideland american lion
was talking to his friend, jess
alex, of course, is my cousin
he is a junior detective
he also works as a newspaper reporter for a school paper
and he and his friend jess
had recieved a letter
that simba and i wrote to alex
immediately after bug catching
before alex read the letter, he was covering a story involving one of his enemies, rufus weasel. of the weasel gang

"look at this, max, did you get the picture about the weasels" said alex

then, his mouse sidekick, max said
"yes alex, i did"

"you and the mice keep me covered with more info" said alex

"will do ,alex" said max

after alex talked to max, he talked to jess about the letter

"hey, alex, there's a letter" said jess

"what" said alex

"its from your cousin" said jess

(alex narrating)

me and jess read the letter
we knew right away that it was a letter from my cousin

"what does it say" said uvoko

"it says that we are supposed to meet simba and nala
near the elephant graveyard
to help stop a plot involving scar" jess said

"well, that sounds kinda ironic, dont you think" said tarna

tarna laughed

rend sneered at tarna and hit him on the head

"sorry about that jess, tarna wasnt listening" said rend

as soon as alex and jess finished reading the letter
jess said :

"ladies and gentlemen, we are about to go and help cousin simba
stop scar's plot of attacking mufasa
hopefully, with your help, we can bring scar down"

so tarna played on his guitar a song
while alex made a speech:

"as many of you know, my cousin is dealing with his uncle and the threat of mufasa being attacked
but i will rest assure you, we will protect my cousin and his friends
and we will bring down scar
and we will bring him down hard
because scar may think that he has power over any innocent animal
but let me tell you, he doesnt
and we will do whatever's necessary to take scar down" said alex

(thrakkan)
scar and the hyenas
they think we're nothing
are we nothing
(alex,tarna,stalker,uvoko,jess)
no
(uvoko)
scar and the outlanders
they think they got us
do they got us
(alex, jess, tarna, thrakkan, stalker)
No
(alex and jess)
even though we dont fight or hunt as smart as other animals
we are a pride
just by saying so
and the pride will know

(kisasian)
what's it going to take to stop scar and the hyenas
are we ready
(jess, alex, thrakkan, tarna, rend, uvoko)
yeah
(tarna)
what's it going to stop scar from attacking mufasa
can we do it
(kisasian, alex, thrakkan, rend, jess)
yeah
(alex and jess)
whether what we need to do
until we break the will of scar and the outlanders

(jess)
and the pride will know
and the outlanders too
(kisasian) mr scar and the hyenas have we got news for you
(thrakkan and uvoko) see the outlanders wont know
why they're going to pay
(uvoko)
instead of fighting, we're being peaceful today
and our group will grow
(thrakkan) and we'll take scar down
(jess ,kisasian, uvoko, thrakkan)
and the outlanders will know that we are here


"lets go" said alex

so alex,jess, and the rest of them started their journey to africa
knowing that hopefully that things will be okay as soon as they got there

(nala narrating)

meanwhile, while alex and his friends were traveling on a plane to visit me and simba
as soon as me and simba started to become cubs
simba was learning about bug hunting
as soon as alex and his friends got to where simba was
they resumed their protest song against scar

(thrakkan)
when scar goes and plot with the hyenas
do we hear him
(jess,uvoko,alex,tarna) no
(young simba and young nala) what if the outlanders come out fighting
do we hear them
(alex,jess,uvoko,thrakkan,tarna) no
(jess,kisasian,young simba,young nala, alex)
when you got a hundred lions singing
who can hear a loud roar

(young simba,young nala, jess, alex, thrakkan, )
and the pride will know
that this ain't no hunt
that we have rotten meat and perfect aim
so the outlanders gave their word
but it isnt worth bugs
now theyre going to see what being prepared really means
and the outlanders cry for scar
and go take a nap
and they have no choice but to hunt more
(thrakkan) i lost a stick
(tarna) and i found some bugs
(alex) and the pride will ---

(young simba)
scar may rule over the outlanders
but he dont rule us
(alex, young nala, jess, tarna, thrakkan)
scar may rule over the outlanders
but he dont rule us
(young simba and jess)
alex, let us swipe the paw
so scar wont swipe us
(tarna,young nala, thrakkan, alex)
let us swipe the paw
so scar wont swipe us

(young simba, alex, jess, young nala


















"nice song" said simba

"thanks' said alex

"name's simba, i'm your cousin" simba

alex shook simba's paw

"name's alex, pleased to meet you,cousin simba"
then said
"this is my friend, jess"

"hello, jess" said simba

"hello" said jess

then jess said
"simba, this is my friend, kisasian"

"hello" said kisasian

simba and nala shook kisasian's paw

"nice to meet you, kisasian" said nala

"nice to meet to meet you both" said kisasian
then she said
"you are really nice friends"

(simba narrating)

as me and nala talked to alex and his friends
alex surveyed what was going on
he and jess used binoculars to see what was going on

"well, everything seems okay
except for---
why are the hyenas annoying some rabbits"

"dont know.dude" said tarna

zazu said :

"young sire, come quick" said zazu

"whats wrong zazu" said simba

"the hyenas! they are attacking a rabbit" said zazu

"zazu,did you see anything strange" said jess

"yes, jess, shenzi was holding a rabbit, and they had them prisoner!"

"alex go with the others and go warn rafiki, if the rabbit is hurt, it may need help" said jess

"okay" said nala

(jess narrating)

so i went with simba nala and zazu to stop the hyenas
and we hatched a plan to rescue the rabbit
from the hyenas
simba explained in his monologue:

(simba narrating)

bears usually tend to be lead to honey, because bees will make the honey
so i did a similar thing involving mud
where if the hyenas were lead to mud
you would safely rescue the rabbit
so me and nala quietly went over to rescue the rabbit

"its okay, we're here to rescue you" said nala

"ya, little rabbit dude, we're here to rescue you" said jess

"who are you guys' said the rabbit

"my name's simba, this is my friend nala" said simba

"hi" said nala

"and this is jess, friend to my cousin, alex" said simba

"hello" said jess

"do you guys have a plan for helping me" said the rabbit

"yes, we do" said nala
then she continued
"zazu will make sure your safe,while that occurs, me jess and simba will trap the hyenas"

"good idea" said the rabbit

"zazu, we located the rabbit" said simba

"good work" said zazu

"zazu, see that you get the rabbit to a safe location" said simba

"all right , young sire" said zazu

so zazu went with the young rabbit to a safe location ,probably to pride rock
where the rabbit would be safe
meanwhile, while that happened
simba and nala still was dealing with the hyenas
ed laughed

"eh, dude, where did the rabbit go" said banzai

"you wont get to it, you mangy poachers, the rabbit is safe!" said simba

"ya, from the likes of you three stupid hyenas" said nala

shenzi growled

"eh, dude, i think this is the part where we run!" said nala

"eh, good idea" simba said

(simba narrating)

the hyenas started chasing me and nala
but at some point, me and nala would come face to face
with our american prideland counterparts for the second time

"hello" said simba

"hiya" said alex


simba shaked his cousin's paw
"pleased to meet you, cousin"

jess shaked nala's paw:
"jess lioness, pleased to meet you"

"likewise" said nala

"so, you sent us a note explaining about scar's threat to attack mufasa" said nala

"that is correct" said jess
she continued
"my dad, sam, is a scientist, he hangs out with a lion adventurer named uvoko
apparently, both of them warned alex about what was going on involving scar"

"this is my dad, sam" said jess

"hello sir" said simba

"hiya" said sam
then he continued
"my daughter told me and your cousin about you, you seem like a nice kid"

"thanks" said simba

just then, uvoko came in

"hi sam, who's this" uvoko said

"sam, this is alex's cousin" sam said

"hi" uvoko said

"hello" said simba

"guys! i dont mean to interrupt the introductions! but arent the hyenas getting away!" said nala

then simba said
"eh, ya, i figured! so, uvoko, do you and sam like to do science experiments"

uvoko said
"ya, simba, me and sam love science experiments,
we tend to help jess and cousin alex with them"

"hey kimosabi" said thrakkan

simba laughed

"yes, thrakkan" said simba

"dude, i think me and tarna and rend may have a idea to solve the problem involving the whole scar and the hyenas situation" said thrakkan

"okay, lets hear your idea" said simba

"what if, me ,tarna, and rend, along with our friend, kisasian, all dressed up undercover
as outlanders, to try to bust scar and the hyenas" said thrakkan

"hmm, that might work,thrakkan" said simba
then he continued
"sure, why not"

(simba narrating)

so me and nala talked to alex and his friends
they showed us their detective camp they had set up
meanwhile, while me and nala were being shown alex and his friends's detective camp out
scar and his hyenas started to hatch a plan to trap me and nala

"what do we do about the pesky cubs, boss" said banzai

"we will trap them! at the elephant graveyard!" said scar

"what do we do if they somehow, get out of their safe" said shenzi

"then we just go after the boy's father" said scar

zazu listened in
as soon as he heard this
he flew to the cubs

"young sire" said zazu

"yes, zazu, what is it" said simba

"scar going to try to attack mufasa and you and nala" said zazu

"that's terrible, he cant do that" said simba
then said
"zazu, warn nala, warn alex and the others"

"right away, young sire" said zazu

(nala narrating)

scar had hatched a early plan to trap me and simba
this was during the expedition of the elephant graveyard
during that expedition though, i had confidence that
alex and his friends would protect me from scar and his henchmen
but it was during this strange and completely awkward plan
that thrakkan and his buddies hatched a plan of their own
to trap scar and the hyenas

"look at this guys" said thrakkan

"what!" said rend

"a bunch of tracks!" said alex

'well, who could have left them there" said simba

"probably the hyenas" said jess

uvoko said :
"if these tracks do belong to the hyenas, they probably are double sets of tracks
the same kinds of tracks that elephants would have when they go around twice"

tarna said "eh dude, i dont like to be the bearer of stupidity here, but if we dont track those hyenas soon, they might try to cause even more trouble"

just then,
simba, and the others attempted to stop scar during the elephant graveyard scenario

"doesnt anyone know that scar is threatening mufasa" thrakkan said

"dont know dude" tarna said

"wouldnt you say that those hyenas are still chasing us" said jess

"yep" said simba

"sometimes you guys dont worry about scar enough" said uvoko



then








but scar's plan failed that time
this was because mufasa got into a fight with the hyenas

now, after that ,
mufasa wasnt very happy with simba and me that we had gone exploring the elephant graveyard
he had a talk with him
as soon as he was done talking to him
i spoke to him
this is where the prologue scene begins:

"simba" said nala

"ya" said simba

"i'm sorry if scar and the hyenas tried to cause trouble toward us" said nala

"it's okay, nala, it wasnt your fault or mine" said simba

just then, simba showed nala the stars

"look at that, nala" said simba

"what" said nala

"when i was talking alone to mufasa
he explained to me that those stars are the great kings of the past
which are watching over us" said simba

"really, wow" said nala

simba smiled

"ya nala, these stars are really cool
and they help guide us" said simba

"cool" said nala

(nala narrating)

so me and simba sat there
looking at the great kings of the past
as we sat there, we thought about the trouble involving scar
and how we'd solve it
now, meanwhile, the hyenas and scar were talking again
about another plot to attack mufasa
but me and nala wouldnt let this happen for any reason
so me and nala listened in to what they were saying :

"so boss, what are we going to do" said banzai

"we are going to attack the king" said scar

the hyenas laughed

"no mufasa! no mufasa! hehe! " said banzai and shenzi

ed laughed

banzai said "eh, if he goes, then who'll be in his spot"

"i will " said scar

as soon as simba and nala heard this:
he devised a detective based plan to outsmart scar

"what should we do to stop scar, simba" said nala

"i have a idea, nala" said simba
then continued
"it requires stealth on our part, follow me"

so they went to the watering hole
and oddly enough
when they stepped into the watering hole
something oddly magical happened
there was simba and nala clones starting to appear










during the stampede scene
as simba along with nala and alex and jess
were investigating what was going on involving the stampede

"yo,chief, come look at this" said alex

"what is it" said simba

"there is a trail of hyena tracks that lead to this canyon" said alex

"thats weird" said simba
then he said
"why the heck do you suppose that they would want to do that"

"maybe the hyenas and scar are after some food, i guess" said jess

then jess made a comment:

"what should we do' said jess

"well, we need to get to a area that we can warn my dad" said simba

"okay, and what about thrakkan tarna and rend, what can they do" said alex

"they can hold off scar" simba said

"good idea' said nala

so, while thrakkan, tarna, kisasian, and rend attacked scar
nala, alex, jess and simba went to warn mufasa
when they saw him, he was still okay

"hi" said mufasa

"hey" said simba
then he said
"i came to warn you,dad, scar is not only trying to attack you, but is also after a small family of wilderbeests for food"

"What!!! why the heck would he do that!!" said mufasa

"dont know" said simba
then continued
"point is, i brought my lion cousin alex with me, to protect you"

"it is a great honor to meet you, sir" said alex
then he continued
"my cousin has told me about you"

"yes , well, we need to get somewhere safe so we are not followed by scar" said mufasa

"okay" said simba

so, simba, alex, jess and nala all went with mufasa over to a cave

"so, dad, why did scar act strange" said simba


"dont know, simba, he and i sometimes will argue , and what i don't enjoy about him, is the way he acts towards others, he is a lot of times weird" said mufasa

"well, i don't blame you,
he is pretty darn weird
but, i think he can change, if given the chance" said simba

shenzi growled at banzai

"banzai, what the heck are you doing " said shenzi

"what the heck is that you think i am doing, i am hunting wilderbeests, duh" said banzai, angrily at shenzi

ed laughed at both banzai and shenzi

shenzi hit ed on the head ,comedically, and banzai started to laugh

meanwhile......
while the hyenas were annoying each other
scar was about to try again, to annoy mufasa
but simba wasnt going to let that happen
he had a plan to take down scar
even with the aid of alex and jess

"well, alex, what we have here is a outlander who has a failure to reason with others" said simba

"dude, what should we do" said alex

"i have a plan: alex, you and jess set up a worm bomb trap to scare scar
thrakkan, you and kisasian, help get mufasa away from scar for a long enough time as possible
and tarna and rend, you and help uvoko and samuel lion come up with any traps in case scar does try to go for mufasa later"

everyone agreed
so alex and jess ,with my help and nala's set up a worm bomb trap for scar
while the others did other things

"what are we exactly doing" said nala

"we are building a worm bomb" said simba

so they found a bug, and a stick to light a fuse, and threw the worm at scar
when the worm landed near scar, scar screamed and ran

"auuuuuggggh!!!!!!!" said scar

just then, the worm bomb exploded near scar, and scar coughed smoke

"does anyone know the name of that wilderbeest" said scar, dizzily
scar fainted after that

the group laughed happily

"we dont need to worry about him for now" said jess

then simba said

"if scar shows up to attack mufasa again,
we will have kala and tana chase him" said simba

"definately!" said jess

jess laughed

"yo dude, i have a joke for you" said jess

"yes" said simba

"what do you call a lion when they hunt fish" said jess

"i dont know, what" said simba

"an arctic lion" said jess

simba laughed

"that's funny, in fact, that's hilarious" said simba

(nala narrating)

now, right before they could plan their next attack toward scar
me and simba gave a speech towards the group:

"i know a lot of you lions, are newer
and come from different locations
but together, we can all stand up and work together against scar"
said simba

then jess said

"what will you do about the incidents involving the outlanders" said jess

nala said
"we as a pride, shouldnt have to fear scar and his antics
we should stand up to him
with any means at our disposal"

alex said
"what will you do about scar"

simba said
"well, as nala said
no one should have to fear him
we will stop scar however necessary
and at whatever means at our disposal
that will be best for us"

kisasian said
"is there a inspiring quote that compares to our situation"

simba said
"well,actually yes
the most interesting quote out of many quotes i like
is one from a famous detective
named mac
who gets out of trouble quite easily
the quote is "it just takes some doing"
my take on that one is "it just takes some hakuna matata doing to figure out a problem"

jess said
"hmmm, i like your take on that quote, chief
its cool"

simba smiled
"thanks"

just then, they saw scar
who was yet again, causing trouble
but simba roared , and decided to pin scar
while jess setted up a trap for scar
but just then, the trap failed
scar clawed jess
and kicked her to the ground
alex growled

"get away from her, scar!, if you hurt her again, you and zira will pay!" said alex

nala said
"simba, you set up scar's trap for in case he does attack mufasa
i will distract him by going after zira"

"good plan, dear" said simba

so nala went and tackled scar
pinning him
just then, simba chased scar
but scar went for mufasa
he dug his claws into mufasa
and said

"long live the king"

mufasa fell toward the wilderbeests
just right after that
simba and the others went after scar and zira

simba and nala threw scar and zira in the mud
alex and jess threw mud at scar and zira
scar threw mud at alex
alex growled

"oh yeah, take this, outland scum"

alex threw mud at scar




later at pride rock,after mufasa fell
simba roared at scar

"scar!!! , why did you hurt jess! " simba said

"she was trying to pin me" said scar

simba growled at scar

"scar! you are lying! you hurt mufasa, and now you attacked alex's girlfriend
you are nothing but a coward!"

alex also growled at scar, with frustration

"exile him and his outland girlfriend" said alex

simba roared to silence the crowd

"SILENCE!!!!!!!!!" Simba shouted

it was quiet for a moment
then simba said

"scar, since you and zira obviously murdered mufasa, and you wounded jess, and you wounded a few wilderbeests
it is my decision that you and zira are to be exiled into the outlands
until you have a chance for possibly coming back in,
and if you and zira try to escape , you will be hunted down"

scar and zira didnt say anything
simba handed down zira and scar's punishment
they were sentenced to being in the outlands
elsewhere in the pridelands
jess was being looked at by sam, kisasian, rafiki, and uvoko for her injury when she had been attacked by scar

"is she okay' said alex

"yes, she survived with minimal injuries" said uvoko

then kisasian said

"jess will recover okay, she just needs to be watched over, and excercise , and take some medicene to heal her injuries" said kisasian

alex smiled happily
and said

"everything will be okay, jess
me and my cousin do what we can to help you recover from that injury from scar"

jess smiled
"thank you"

simba smiled at jess
"your welcome"

meanwhile, lions and lionesses were hunting for food
but this was not a scar hunt
this was just a hyena hunt

"dude, i think i see some hyenas there" said rend

then kala said to rend

"okay, lets catch it" said kala

they ran to catch it,
they went after it
snuck over
pounced

"got it, dude" said kala

"yeah!!!!!!!!" said rend

tarna laughed

"the way you guys pounced on that hyena was Hilarious!!!!" said tarna

the group laughed

now, meanwhile
simba and nala were alone
they talked alone peacefully
not worrying about scar at all

"dear, should i have been a little bit easier on scar" said simba

nala smiled
"simba, you were doing the right thing for standing up for alex's friend
and even though mufasa was attacked, and scar annoying people,etc
i still stood up for you
you shouldnt let scar bother you"

'you know, nala, your right
i'm not going to let him bother me"

"okay ,dear" said nala

simba nudged nala

nala smiled

nala nudged simba

simba smiled

simba and nala both nudge

(nala narrating)

as both me and simba were peacefully alone
we nudged, and hugged
not worrying at all about scar
we were finally at peace for awhile

now meanwhile, thrakkan , kisasian, alex, and rend
were on patrol trying to stop some random hyenas

'i see something" said thrakkan

just then, they spotted a hyena
and caught it

meanwhile, back over at pride rock
simba and nala were still alone

"what i dont quite understand is, why scar would manage to attack a wilderbeest
and try to wound jess" said nala

"i dont get it either,nala"
then he continued
"the fact that scar was being rather strange, i obviously don't know"

nala smiled

"well, we don't need to worry about him still, dear" said nala

"your right" said simba

nala put her paw on simba's paw

simba smiled

simba put his paw on nala's paw

nala smiled

nala nudged simba for a long time

simba smiled

simba nudged nala for a long time

nala smiled

simba and nala nudged and hugged each other

"don't worry, dear, i'm sure that the problems with scar
will stop soon" said nala

"i hope so, nala, i hope so" said simba

simba hugged nala

(thrakkan narrating)

now meanwhile,
as soon as scar was in the outlands with zira
scar grew a beard
this was a reminder that scar was now a fugitive
and that if he caused any trouble again
he would be hunted down by simba and the others
scar talked to zira alone
zira tried to cheer him up

"scar, dear, what's wrong" said zira

"oh, i think i ate a bad wilderbeest, and it gave me this bad stomach ache" said scar
then he continued
"that's why i'm laying down here, because i think i ate too much"
scar started to have a episode where he decided to throw up because he ate too much wilderbeest
when this happened, a lot of threw up goo landed on zira

"eeeeeewwwww!!!!!!! gross!!!!!!" said zira

then, shenzi said

"dont worry, scar, everything is going to be ok" said shenzi

so shenzi and zira took scar to find someone to help him
the best they could come up with was simba's cousin alex
but alex however, was in no mood to let them be helped
after what scar did to jess

alex growled at zira
"why should i help scar , after you and scar almost hurted my cousin's dad"

zira said "he had a wilderbeest flu"

alex menacingly clawed zira and scar

"you outland scum! you attacked my cousin's dad!
you think that you can just hurt my cousin's dad
and then, ask for my help to heal scar just so he can cause more damage to innocent lives
as simba's cousin, and a detective, i have a right to say whether or not i should help you two or not
and since the both of you did wrong, you can find some other healer to help heal scar
because i am not interested in healing scar ,just so that scar can commit more brutal outland acts of assault!" said alex

"did he give the order to hunt me" said scar

"say what" said alex

"i said , Did he give the order to hunt me!"

"Yes, he did!" alex said angrily to scar

then, jess and tarna restrained alex
as alex was about to go after zira and scar again

"scar, you and zira will regret attacking mufasa
i will hunt the both of you two down
and claw you two
you messed with the wrong lion" said alex angrily at scar

when alex calmed down, jess took over speaking
and said to scar

"you know, alex is right, scar
you and zira are nothing but trouble
the both of you two are under arrest for the murder of mufasa
you worthless no good outlander scum!"

when things calmed down
the hyenas talked

"hey dude, did you see what was happening" said shenzi

"no what' said banzai

"alex was interrogating scar, and they got into a arguement" said shenzi

"whoa! that is like weird!" said banzai

ed laughed

little did these two realize that they were being spied on
tarna and rend were writting down their conversation

"dude, did you hear that, scar had a stomach flu
from eating a bad wilderbeest" said tarna

"yea, i know" rend said

"we should tell chief" said tarna

"okay, dude" said rend

both tarna and rend laughed humorously as they went off to tell simba
when they got to pride rock
they told him

"dude, you wont believe this
but guess what" said tarna

"what" said simba

"scar ate too much wilderbeest, and apparently he has a stomach flu" said rend

simba laughed

"so that means, we wont see him for awhile, i guess" said simba

(nala narrating)

well, even though scar wasnt around right now to be chased
zira was
so i was determined ,with the help of alex,thrakkan, tarna and simba, to set a trap for zira
because you never know what kind of outlander is going to do strange things
and i noticed on a map, that if me and the others can get to where we need to
before zira
our problems with her might stop
just then, we saw her

"what the heck!!" said zira

rend decided to try to claw zira
but chose to stand down
and said firmly

"zira! what in the heck are you doing!!" said rend

"eh, i'm just trying to help scar"

when she didnt answer
simba said

"GET HER!!!"

zira ran from the oncoming crowd of lions hunting her
but simba wanted to make sure that he caught zira
zira made a make shift mud sled to slide down the hill
and then a few minutes later
she got on a zebra to race to safety

(nala narrating)
well, at least , one thing's for sure
at least scar wasnt bothering us

(goes to fanfic credits)


simba and nala

a lion king fan fic
written in episodes
by simbafan83

lion king fan fic is
based upon different random situations in random tv shows and movies [action movies, comedies, detective tv shows, etc]
that include lion king

regular lion king characters :

mufasa (who appears in the prologue and random scenes)

simba
nala
sarabi
sarafina
rafiki
zazu
scar
banzai
shenzi
ed
zira
timon
pumbaa

new characters:
alex
jess
samuel lion
uvoko
thrakkan
kala
tana
tarna
rend
kisasian, etc

first episode written by simbafan83

additional episodes can be co-written
by other mlk users

(end of fanfic credits, resumes story)

episode 1 - chapter 1

(nala narrating)

there are a lot of strange mysteries that seem to go on
but none so strange as how someone apparently attacked mufasa
i was talking to simba, who was planning out the day
and it was really snowy in the pridelands
so he didnt seem to mind at all about the strange weather

"dear" said nala

"yes" said simba

"there is some hyenas bothering the wilderbeests again" said nala
then she said
"what should we do"

"i guess we should go talk to them, see why they are bothering them" said simba

(simba narrating)

nala and i laughed happily as we noticed something dumb going on
we had noticed that the hyenas had just threw snow at a crocodile
and the crocodile got really angry at banzai and ed and started chasing them

"excuse me, but why did a hyena threw snow at me' said the crocodile

'i guess he thought it was a snow fight" said simba

nala laughed

"say,nala, i have a joke for you" said simba

"okay" said nala

"why did the lion say to the gecko when the gecko needed to go catch a bus" simba said

"i dont know, what" nala said

"the lion said to the gecko when the gecko got to the bus stop "we accept gecko passengers"
simba said

nala laughed "thats pretty funny,in fact,thats hilarious"
nala said

just then, the crocodile came up behind the hyenas and chased them again
one of the hyenas screamed

"dude, what the heck is that" said shenzi

"i think thats a bunch of scaly alligators" said banzai

"what should we do,chief" said banzai

ed laughed

"i would have to say, run" said shenzi


(simba narrating)

now, while me and nala were talking to the hyenas
scar was still sick because he ate too much wilderbeest
and was lying down in bed
and zira was taking care of him
and he now developed a very bad outland flu

scar sneezed

"aah aah achooo" scar sniffled, becuase he was sick

"dear, i made for you some water to drink, it has some soup in it"

"thanks" said scar in a rather congested voice
because he was about to sneeze again

"your welcome" zira smiled

(tarna narrating)

meanwhile, back at pride rock


(nala narrating)

as me and simba investigated what was going on involving the hyenas
we saw a footprint
that had belonged to the hyenas

"look at this,nala"

"what is it"

"one of the hyenas left foot prints"

"why would they do that"

"maybe they want us to follow them,maybe they are after one of those heffalump things that pooh bear usually catches"

"eh, dude, i think if these paw prints are what i think they are, i think the hyenas could be after a baby wilderbeest, not a heffalump"

simba laughed

"ok"

they soon spotted even more paw prints
that were not only coming from the hyenas
but also a gang of outlanders

"that is strange, why would outlanders join up with the same group of paw prints as the hyenas"

"dont know, maybe they wanted to have a wilderbeest buffet, i think"

simba laughed at that joke
"good one"

(nala continued narrating)

just then, alex jess, thrakkan , rend , and tarna came to help investigate
to simba, these prideland secondaries were just as helpful to me and simba
as it is to any sidekick for any random detective

"dude, is there any reason at all that these hyenas are acting strange"
said alex

"i dont know, alex, maybe they are wanting a wilderbeest buffet"
simba said

" i got a theory, i saw this nature film , where a wolf tried to eat squirells"
said jess

"jess, what does squirells and wolves have to do with the wilderbeests and hyenas" said alex

"think about it, guys
apparently, our scenario involving wilderbeests and hyenas is similar
because of their size
the wolves attacking the squirells are different sizes
now, this is why that both of them have different sizes
the wilderbeests is a different size from the hyenas
because it is taller"

" correct" said nala

jess continued

"and it is because of their head shape , and the horns on the wilderbeests
that they managed to strike mufasa" said jess

"correct" said alex

"but with this new coincidence, involving the hyenas attacking the wilderbeests, i would say that the reason that they are having a quarrel
is probably because the hyenas are looking for food" said jess

"you are correct, jess, the hyenas are looking for food" simba said

tarna laughed

'dude, i see paw prints' said tarna

'tarna, will you please be quiet" said thrakkan

nala laughed
then said to alex

"dude, i dont mean to interrupt , but why do you suppose that the hyenas would chase some wilderbeests" said nala

"i dont know" said alex

then simba commented

"guys, i think i see some more tracks"

"where do they lead" said alex

"i think that this new set of tracks lead straight to the elephant graveyard
where the hyenas was with scar when they tried to plot the attack on mufasa"
said simba

"lets follow these tracks,guys" said jess

(alex, simba, jess, and nala, narrating)

we took our group to the elephant graveyard
when we got there
we saw that the hyenas were hiding out with scar

"we know your in there scar! come out with your paws up
and your hyenas too" said nala

scar and the hyenas didnt hear the group yelling at them
because they were far enough away

"eh chief, i think we're being followed" said shenzi

"what is it, shenzi, is it a lion from a different pride complainig about my attack"

ed laughed

"what is it,dude" shenzi said

"we need to hide carefully,so that these detectives dont try anything dumb"
said scar

"where can we hide" said banzai

"i think i know where we can hide, my hyena friends
i think my friend zira can help us hide in the outlands" said scar

"dude, if we do that,you'll be asking for trouble from those lions that are chasing us
i think we should just hide in a hyena cave" banazi said

"good idea" said shenzi

so the hyenas and scar went to hide in a cave for hyenas
so their tracks wouldnt be found by the detecitves
meanwhile, simba and the others were still looking at the tracks
from a few miles ago

"what happened" said simba

"dude, the hyenas and scar went hiding" said jess

"you'd think" said simba

"this coming from a dude who watches detective shows" said thrakkan

tarna laughs

"guys, as we can tell by the tracks, it is obvious that scar is trying to ask zira for help" said nala

"if he succeeds in asking zira for help, they will be asking for trouble, from us"
said alex

"i agree with alex on that theory" said jess

"guys, do you know where scar and the hyenas may have went"
said simba

tarna laughed jokingly

"well, there is this dude who was a waterhole, and he was chasing a alligator

rend growled at tarna and interrupted his joke:

"tarna,this is not the proper time for jokes, simba is trying to tell the group about where the hyenas and scar went off to" rend said

"oops,sorry,rend,i thought it was all you can eat wilderbeest buffet day" tarna said

nala laughed at tarna's comment
but then rend and thrakkan growled

"dude, we are trying to hear the meeting" thrakkan growled at tarna

"okay,okay ,dude,calm down" said tarna

tarna was quiet for a few minutes
while the meeting started

"okay,what do we know about the hyenas and scar" said simba

"well chief, so far, the hyenas and scar aparently have left a series of tracks
at various areas
and their current location is that they are on the run heading for the outlands"
said alex

just then, simba made a speech:

"listen up, ladies and gentlemen
our prideland fugitives have been on the run for about at least 50 minutes
average foot speed is about 16 to 18 miles
what i want out of each and everyone of you, is a hard boiled, hard target search
of every location that these animals may try to run and hide to
checkpoints go up at 13 miles
your prideland fugitives names are : scar, zira, banzai, shenzi, and ed
go get them"

just then alex made a comment:

"nice speech" said alex

"thanks, alex" said simba

just then, tarna made a joke

"hey alex, i have a joke for you" said tarna

"ok tarna, go right ahead" said alex

"ok, why did scar cross the road" tarna said

"i dont know" said alex

"he wanted to get to the other side" said tarna

alex laughed
"thats hilarious tarna" said alex

simba said "i agree with alex, the joke is funny"

"eh, i dont get it" said kisasian

"as much as i dont enjoy letting these outlanders get away with there dumb antics, guys
if we are going to outsmart them, we need to think like them" said thrakkan

"eh, dude, that is a hilarious idea" nala said

so the group of detectives went undercover as outlanders to try to expose scar
when the group was in disguise, simba narrated with a log:

simba's detective log:
me and the other detectives are in pursuit of scar,zira, and the hyenas
in less than a hour, if scar tries to get to zira's hideout
they may try to plot to hurt wilderbeests

nala's log:
hurry up, dude, we need to chase those people Now!

alex said to jess:

"jess, look at these tracks"

"yeah"

alex shows jess the tracks

"these sets of tracks lead to where scar and the others are"
said alex

"hmmmm, what do you think, kisasian" said jess

"well, alex, judging by the series of tracks, i'd say that scar and his band of outlanders are somewhere in the outlands" said kisasian

then simba said

"hmm, well, judging by the number of paw prints that scar and the other people have left behind
i would say that their current location is somewhere in a remote hyena cave" said simba

"okay, lets go" said alex

(Simba narrating)

so our group continued our search for scar ,zira, and the hyenas
unaware that if they were hiding out
they could be trying to cause trouble
so we had to think of a plan to outsmart them
even if we had to disguise as outlanders ourselves to trap scar's group

nala's log:
we just found the hyena cave, the outlanders are hiding in there
if our calculations are correct , we may be able to disguise ourselves as outlanders for enough time to trap scar and his men

simba's detective log:
hurry up, guys, we're not going to sit around
while scar and his angry girlfriend of a outland lioness
tries to plot to do something really dumb
it is bad judgement, if you ask me

tarna laughed at simba's log joke


"good one" said tarna

"thanks" said simba
then simba continued
"lets go"

(nala narrating)

so our group proceeded with disguising as outlanders
they changed their appearance ,so scar wouldnt recognize them
each one of the detectives put on really funny disguises
as soon as they were dressed in disguises
they went as a group to hunt scar's group

"dude, what's our plan" tarna said

"the plan is, we trap scar and his men" said simba

"what might happen if the plan fails on the first try"
said thrakkan

"we'll keep chasing them" said nala

the group was dressed as outlanders
but they had to be careful
because they didnt want scar zira and the hyenas to suspect them
as soon as we spotted them , alex said

"there they are" alex said

"lets get them" said simba

scar zira and the hyenas started to run , and they ran for pretty much awhile

"scar, why the heck is your nephew chasing us and the hyenas" said zira

"dont know" said scar
then he continued
"i think that at the same time as the attack on mufasa, i got involved with an attack involving a baby wilderbeest"

"you what!!!!!!" said zira

"apparently, z, i had injured the baby wilderbeest's parent" said scar

"darn it, scar, that is so stupid of you" said zira
then she continued
"how the heck would you sink so darn low as to injure a family of wilderbeests" said zira ,angrily at scar

"well, i---- eh, uh, ugh" scar stammered

scar didnt say anything

meanwhile, simba and the others found out

"chief, you wont believe this" said tarna

"what, tarna" said simba

"at the same time as scar attacking mufasa, scar also attacked a wilderbeest parent"
said tarna

"and so, the pieces of why scar is being chased is finally coming to play" said thrakkan

(nala narrating)

as me and simba and the others in the group started again to chase scar zira and the hyenas
we noticed that scar's next location was going to be a outland waterhole

nala's log:
we just found scar's next location that he and zira and the hyenas were heading
and in a few minutes time, we will start again on our pursuit of scar, zira, and the hyenas

simba's log:
hurry up, scar zira and the hyenas causing trouble
and we still need to stop them

tarna laughed

"dude, look at this" alex said

"what is it" said simba

"looks like theres a small trail of hyena tracks leading to their next location" said nala

"lets follow these tracks" said jess

a few minutes later.....

scar zira and the hyenas were running from the detectives

"what the heck is going on' said zira

"i dont know" said scar then said "just keep running"

"why are we running" said zira

"it is obvious that they are after us" said scar

"dude, calm down" said zira

ed laughed

"quit it ed" said banzai

"yeah ed, your being of no help man" said shenzi

meanwhile.....
simba and the others were planning their next move

"guys, i think i just saw another set of tracks" simba said

just then, simba saw yet another stupid incident take place
scar had gone and attack yet another baby wilderbeest

"guys, scar has now attacked two baby wilderbeests and mufasa
we need to do something" said simba

"what can we do" said nala

"i think that the logical thing that we can do, everyone
is continue to be disguised as outlanders
but as for more assistance to stop those people" simba said

"i think i may have a idea"

nala wrote a note to her friends, tana and kala
two lioness cousins of her's
meanwhile, alex wrote a note to hire jess's dad, samuel lion and uvoko
and nala, wrote a note to timon and pumbaa and kisasian
when all of these notes got through,
the extra members of the detective team were assembled slowly
starting with samuel lion, tana and kala, and kisasian

"you were all brought here , because we need help chasing some dangerous outland fugitives"
said simba

"hey, what about timon and pumbaa" said kala

"they will show up later" said simba
then he continued
"i will pair all of you up into teams: you are to hunt scar, zira, and the hyenas
with your team
thrakkan, you will be with : tarna, rend, kisasian, and stalker

"aye aye, mon capitan" said thrakkan

"while alex jess uvoko and samuel lion, you will be with me, nala , kala and tana"

"okay, simba" said samuel lion

"you will find clues as to what scar and his henchmen are doing, and you will report back to me and my team about your clue findings, so it will help us further in our search for scar and his henchmen" said simba
then he continued
"all of you will be dealing with a bunch of outlanders who may try to cause trouble
and at all costs, do not let them , i repeat, do not let them try to do things that would embarass anyone" said simba


episode continues in part 2
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Re: simba and nala

Postby Arani » February 1st, 2013, 11:39 pm

Nice work, keep it up! =)
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Re: simba and nala

Postby simbafan83 » February 2nd, 2013, 7:56 am

episode 1 - part 2

(simba narrating)

as the two groups were assigned to their assignments
my group was me, nala, alex, jess, samuel lion, uvoko, kala, and tana
while the second group was thrakkan, tarna, kisasian, rend, and stalker
both of our groups were after scar and his henchmen
we had enough people on our side to out number scar
all except for timon and pumbaa
who we still needed to find
but anyway,
as both of our groups continued to search for clues
we saw something

"chief, i think i spotted something" said thrakkan

simba saw another wilderbeest that scar hurt

"guys, look at this" said simba

"what is it" said nala

"looks like scar wanted a wilderbeest for lunch" said simba

tana looked at the helpless wilderbeest that scar hurt

"ew, scar really did a lot of damage to this one" said kala

"yea i know" said simba
he continued
"it is sad, these wilderbeest shouldnt have to deal with being beat up by scar" said simba

"but, didnt a wilderbeest hurt your dad" said thrakkan

"yes, i know" said simba
then he continued
"but this is a detective case ,thrakkan, these wilderbeests are different than the ones that hurt my dad
and i strongly believe that whatever is going on involving scar talking to zira
must be in connection with these mysterious attacks involving these wilderbeests"

"leaping leopards,chief , that is a hilarious theory" said thrakkan

tarna laughed

"i would have to agree" said tarna
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Re: simba and nala

Postby nalasimba2223467 » February 11th, 2013, 11:17 pm

Cool!!
-What's wrong?
-If I told you, you wouldn't believe me...
-Don't worry, I'm here for you.
-...I hate myself. I'm completley useless and the only reason people talk to me is because I'm a replacement untill they're real friends come back to them. I'm just a loser that everybody takes advantage of. I suck.
-Listen to me, you DO NOT suck. You're an extraordinary person with lots of love give around and everyone adores you. Whoever doesn't is just not worth your time. You are talented, nice, outgoing, SUPER funny, beautiful, courageous, and so many other things that it would take me two days to say them all. Whatever people say, you're most definatley NOT a loser.
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Re: simba and nala

Postby TheLionPrince » March 15th, 2013, 2:00 am

Well, I finally got down to reading it. It was pretty good, though simbafan, you need to improve on your grammar by capitalizing, and use more punctuation marks like periods.
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Re: simba and nala

Postby simbafan83 » March 15th, 2013, 9:58 pm

okay
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Re: simba and nala

Postby Taylor » April 10th, 2013, 3:39 am

Hmm.. It sounds very interesting. I like the idea, and the over-all story. However, I agree with TheLionPrince about the grammar. And maybe you could also turn it into a RolePlay soon, if you're wanting others to join in. Anyways, I think it is sounding nice so far. :)
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