TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

[whitewolf17]

It's an interesting chapter but I do have one slight query?

Lights and radios? Seems like interesting things for lions to be using but I kinda liek it.

[KiarasMate]

Hmm, well, this was an interesting story to say the least thus far WS. ^^ When it comes to my taste in Fan Fics for TLK, I tend not to like anything human related in them, but that's honestly just me and I don't mean anything by it my friend. ^^ The plot is good and I hope you'll continue to work on this story buddy. ^^ Keep up the awesome work.

[WildSimba]

Chapter 3: Chaos on priderock

Uchawi looked behind and saw what had happened. He saw that the "drinks" he hid had blown up too early. The cap on one of the drinks fell off, and dripped onto the floor, going near the candles and setting it on fire. Since this happened, he made his attack.

He jumped towards Rafiki and started to claw at him, missing most of the time. Then, when he finally got a good hit in, Rafiki dropped the newborn baby from his hands, and it fell from the top of the rock, just barely landing safely, in a monkeys arms. Uchawi was furious. He took the other bottle of unharmed drink, and threw it off the rock, making it crash onto one of the elephants backs, the elephant starting runnings around, spreading the drink everywhere. Uchawi, then threw one of the candles off the rock, and suddenly flames started to emerge. The monkey ran away, getting badly burned by the fire, but set down the newborn cub, who was surprisingly alright. The monkey then died, along with a lot of the pridelanders. Uchawi then headed towards Kiara.

"How could you do this too me? Why would you try and make this new kid the new king? I DESERVE TO BE KING!" He screamed, and started to claw at Kiara. He then clawed her in the face, and she fell down, crying, begging for him to stop. But he didn't, he continued to claw her. He then did the unthinkable. He took her by the paw, and dragged her towards the cliff.

"Any last words, Mrs. Kiara?"

"Please don't do this... Uchawi!" She screamed, still in horrible pain.

"If I don't, then you'll just have another child, and make it king."

"No Uchawi! I LOVE YOU! MOTHER LOVES YOU! Please! Mother loves you so so much!"

Uchawi felt sorry for her, but decided it was to late to turn back. He took her by the leg again, and threw her off the cliff. She screamed his name as she fell down.

Then he looked towards Rafiki.

[CommandoTheLion]

Awesome 2 Chapters xD

[LilTiger]

OMG, Please do mroe! I'm getting interested!

[CommandoTheLion]

[quote="LilTiger"]OMG, Please do mroe! I'm getting interested![/quote]

yes me too xD this is such a great story xD i cannot wait for more xD

Im very intrested