"The Pride That Never Was"

[YFWE]

I love the insight into the story! Really, to be honest, this made me want to read the story all over again! Thanks for all the insight! Much appreciated. ^^

[Kitten84]

I just read it straight through. Absolutely wonderful, Akril. You never cease to amaze me with your talents.

*big applause*

[Akril]

Thank you very much, you two!

[BlitzRogue]

Well, I just read it through, and I must say I wasn't entirely impressed with the first half nearly so much as the latter. You tied things up quite nicely, but even so, certainly not your best work. Considering the amount of actual effort you put into it in comparison to some of your other works though, it came out pretty well. Some of the dialogue was fairly dry and characterization was slightly less than I was expecting (though I'm bias in having read "The Road Less Traveled" : P), but as I said, it improved greatly in the second half of the story.

Overall, great job. I'm still a big admirer of your work; keep it up! : )

[clausbelly]

I love this story and I learn so much from this story.

[atouchofgrace]

I love this story and the character designs are really something. Good job!

[zorayda]

=O What's this? *reads eagerly*

EDIT: Wow. I've just read through the entire story, and I must say--I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sort of added what I already knew about these characters to whatever you had given them, and I felt like I got a deeper look into some of my favorite characters and how they would react in certain situations. I also like that I got to see some new characters as well--Chaka and Timira, in particular, are my favorite. I would have liked to have more of them and definitely more of Chaka.

I think I also would have liked to have seen more of your own originality and planning behind this--I'm not saying that it wasn't very creative and a great idea, but I really think that something like this could have been expanded and could have had a lot more of your own original story ideas added in. I'm a bit biased, though, due to reading 'The Road Less Travelled' several times over XD

[Azdgari]

Bumped for love and the common good. <3

[Zoketi]

That was a really great fanfic! You have superb details, and it really seems fitting with all the characters and changes! I know this is repetitive but amazing work!
I enjoyed the way you layed everything out, and how it all fit with the actual storyline. The made-up characters definitely added more to this, because in the actual movie it seemed they only had the main lions/lionesses and Timon, Pumbaa, and Zazu. I always wanted to know some of the other lions, it felt like they were so out of it. The way you added Timira and her mother was good too, I always thought there should have been other cubs in the pride that Kiara could play with. Binti and Zazu were just perfect, and the chicks....a great addition. And you have to love Winston(I liked how he showed Shani and Kovu to the warring prides, rather than just being a bird's mount all the time).
You have great writing and ideas, so keep up the epicness!

[TLK+Warriors Fan]

I remember soooo much of this from the movie <3 I absolutely LOVE it! Actually, I'm beginning to like their first names then their edited ones in the movies, great job!!!