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Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 4:34 pm
by KingKovu44
Title: Balto II: Redemption

Story: This is my own version of the continuation of the Balto story. In this version, Rosy and her family adopted Balto as their own after the serum run to thank him for what he had done. Now, the story continues. Balto is happy with Jenna, Steele eventually finds redemption and much more. Then we get to where Aleu runs away and Balto, Jenna, her sisters, Steele and Star.

Cast:

Balto- KingKovu44

Jenna- FoxFighter99

Steele- Sixshot1988

Star- KingKovu44

Ice (Jenna's OC sister, Steele's future mate)- KingKovu44

Amy (Jenna's other OC sister, Star's future mate)-Foxfighter99

Aleu (features later in story)- KingKovu44

Kalu- FoxFighter99

Boris- Sixshot1988

Muk & Luk- Sixshot1988

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 4:48 pm
by KingKovu44
Balto couldn't have been more happy. As reward for saving Rosy and the other children, Rosy and her family were adopting him. Rosy's father placed a brown leather collar around his neck. He looked at Jenna. "Look, Jenna," he said, showing it proudly.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 8:51 pm
by Sixshot1988
" Nice collar, but it not important." Boris said. " What is important is you saved Nome." The goose said. "Uncle boris is just sad your moving out of the boat." Luk said as muk nodded.

Meanwhile Steele was skulking. He lost it all, his fme, his presteige, and what was worse his musher was dead, succumed to the cold and wounds that were steele's fault.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 9:00 pm
by KingKovu44
Balto smiled proudly. "Hey, guys. Don't be sad. I'll come and visit you guys whenever I get the chance. I would never forget some of my best friends," he said.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 9:12 pm
by Sixshot1988
"Who says I'm sad, I won't have to see you mope around." Boris said.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 9:20 pm
by KingKovu44
Balto smirked. "That's behind me, Boris. All I have to do now is make sure that Steele doesn't come around again if he's even still alive," he said.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 9:28 pm
by Sixshot1988
"And what kill you? he'd be shot if he tried." Boris said. "yeah, I think he's sulking by himself."Luk added.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 5th, 2012, 9:31 pm
by KingKovu44
Balto looked ahead. "Well, I guess this is the last time we see each other for awhile, guys. Be happy," he said.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 6th, 2012, 1:44 am
by fox_fighter99
"Welcome home Balto." Jenna giggled her tail wagging back and forth "You finally have a family that will take care of you." Jenna nuzzled up against Balto.

Meanwhile while Balto said his goodbye's to his friends a white wolf with black on its paws, ears, and tip of his tail moved closer to the house, the sight of that goose was intoxicating not having eaten in two days. He poked his head around the corner seeing his prey his only obstacles were just about everything and the humans in town, but hunger drove him and Kalu charged growling in hunger.

Re: Balto II: Redemption

PostPosted: July 6th, 2012, 1:47 am
by KingKovu44
Balto licked Jenna's cheek. "I couldn't have done what I did without your memory and that of your human to keep me going. Now, shall we go back to our home?" he said.