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This is my first fanfic I've done and it's the first in a three to four part series I'm making. This first part deals with Star, a young wolf who's kidnapped by humans and is put into an illegal wolf-fighting league.
After quite a while of working, I'm almost done and I'll post new chapters every week or so. This is the first half of chapter one:
Chapter One: Abduction
Ever since he was old enough to walk Star had made it a priority to wake up every morning from his den before sunrise so he could go out to the edge of the ice fields to watch as the sun slowly rose above the horizon and turned the ice into a show of lights. But this morning was different.
Star was still asleep well after sunrise that morning and he only awoke when his small cave of a den was flooded with light by the sun. Star lived near the edge of his pack's territory in a small group of dark caves that were created by millions of years of mountain slides and glacial shifts. On clear nights Star would sit with his mate Ember and together they would spend hours upon hours looking up at the stars and the moon.
But there were problems with where he lived. If his territory was ever trespassed upon by rival wolves he would almost always be hit first by incoming wolves; or if another wolf was found wandering nearby Star had the responsibility to escort it back to where it came from. Usually by force.
When the sunlight hit Star he let out a tired growl and lowered his head to the ground so he wouldn't get blinded by the light. Grudgingly Star began to arise from his long slumber by stretching his long muscular body out on the floor listening to his joints creak and crick. When he was finally upright Star looked around his cave for any sign of his mate but she was nowhere to be found.
Star had wanted to wait for Ember to return but he didn't have any more time to waste.
Since the middle of last year wolves were disappearing from their territories never to be heard from again. Wolves vanishing was not something that was unheard of in Star's and the neighboring pack's areas but wolves were disappearing at such an alarming rate it was causing tension between packs; most notably Star's own pack the Silver Tail pack which was named after the head wolf's oddly colored tail and the Snowy River pack which lived on and near the ice floes right outside of Star's territory.
Star had elected to sleep in that morning because of his mission. The head wolf of his pack Zirco had chosen Star to be a diplomat between the snowy river pack and his own. For many generations the Snowy River pack and the Silver Tail pack waged war with each other until Zirco's father had managed to call an armistice between the two packs. This was a very successful move until the disappearances began. The Snowy River pack had lost over half of its wolves and they were convinced that Star's pack were behind it all.
Star was to meet with the leader of the Snowy River pack Pyrix, at a neutral location deep into the woods far away from both packs where Star and the enemy leader would try to peacefully discuss the issue at hand.
Please comment and if ya have any constructive advice I would much appreciate it.