by Eli_Ayase » July 8th, 2014, 10:13 pm
Not much big of ideas. Maybe only one was to have Ahadi perhaps be less concerned for Taka, thus he slowly starts to grow jealous of Muffy. There are lot of nice things to twist the plot about to not be close to the 6NA book, and there are a few I'll throw out, but not sure x3'.
-Ahadi is less caring for Taka after Mufasa was said to be king (where as he spends more time with Mufasa)
-Taka grows jealous (obvious...)
-Muffy dares Taka to go to the outlands because he thought Taka's scared (where he would possibly meet the hyena trio), later on Ahadi goes to rescue when the adult hyenas and their leader are planning to possibly kill little Taka, and is saved.
Those three are like the ones I can come up with, but you're free of changing some things and adding your own idea to it :3 as for the scars on Taka's face for later, I have two verses on how.
-Ahadi's rage, not meaning to.
-Hyena injury, but saved right on time.
^^; Those are pretty much it of my ideas. Again, you're free to twist them about :3 Or add more. There could be more of things to add (such as Scar meeting Zira only around maybe when he's a teen, and she's a pre-teen lioness), but I'm not sure if you want it to go to the end till Mufasa's and Sarabi's coronation xD (I don't mind if you do).