by Carl » December 14th, 2014, 8:08 pm
(I think we need to progress the story... we're waiting on you having Mufasa show Simba the kingdom, that's what's holding us back. I told you it's up to you when and how you do it, but I don't have any more story for this segment. Also, Scar had already left the cave; so again you need to pay attention to my posts if we are to continue this. This time, I'll play along with what you wrote, but if it happens again, I won't post again until you fix the discrepancies.)
"If we are enemies, it is entirely your doing, Mufasa; you never understood and you still don't. We used to play together like they do because we used to be brothersㅡuntil you let your future as king change you," Scar replied, his voice as emotionless and bored as it had grown accustomed to being with his brother. He studied his paw boredly as he went on, "You let it go to your head. You became cocky. You berated me; incessantly putting me down because I would not live up to the title you would. Maybe you saw it merely as cubhood teasing, but that's not what it was to me. You alienated me from the rest of the pride, Mufasa.
"You can try to make up for it, and maybe something will improve; but you're too late to ever undo the damage."
With that, the dark lion rose on his paws and strode away, making his way back to his cave and the gray cub within, wondering if there even was something Mufasa could do to make up for all the wrong he'd done, and deciding that there probably wasn't. The king had made his bed and he would have to lay in it.
Meanwhile, unaware of what had occurred between the two adults, Simba just smiled at his brother, "I love you too, 'Dofo."