An excellent start to what I'm sure will turn out to be a magnificent story Kivuli.
Since I've had the pleasure of RPing with you, I know that this will develop into an unforgettable tale and I look forward to reading more of it as you post it.
You know, you had me worried in the beginning though, when you stated Kiara wasn't feeling good. lol. I thought she was going to be dead when Kovu came back into the den or something. lol. ) I need to tone it down with the mellow dramas in my life though it would seem.
any-who, keep up the amazing work my friend! ^^